Saturday, May 25, 2013

WEEK 8

this week, five words from the ominous voice of ms. sylvia plath.





 



Daring

marble

freakish

tongue

obscene


enjoy your anonymity. in this time of "look at me", youve chosen to keep it real.


fun writing.

7 comments:

Axe Parker said...

THINKING OF SYLVIA PLATH

well the first thing to know
is you've got to get going
got to get the obscene scene
spread out in your mind
like a deck of tarot cards
with heavy times wild times
rhymes that won't stay put
followed by the hard core night
Sylvia Plath was a daring woman,
her words of depression, anger,
father, told and untold, the soul,
such pain in the heart such danger
to split the psyche like marble
a tongue of freaks, a freakish tongue
water is the healing thought
midnight is the backyard moon
waiting and we hope for ease
not like Sylvia going down
her head in the oven hoping
for rescue rescue rescue

Reginald "Red Hawk" Bloom said...

PLUSHIE

the morning light burns
an obscene blackness
and void
ace of hearts

she likes vision
marble lips burning tongue
say it again
ace of hearts

benadryl benadryl benadryl
reduce the histamines
ace of joy
ace of now

ace of that's how it's put together

he's upset now
I'm upset too
flamingo dies softly
each severed limb whispers
a gentle waba waba
freakish farewell
daring the day back into night

Luna Dennis said...

ALLEY WAY

power begins

freakish dog
heart attack alley
California night fence
hair in ribbons
modern dance shadows
squirming

stonefruit

carved in marble
only the tongue is free
statue of the night
silver tongue -- SPEAK

hobos scream obscenities
but that's not obscene
we arrive daring
dyslexia sucks
chanting is truth

dog drawn to the beat of the drum

Freilyn Waxfield said...

Epidemiology

strip away the words

reveal the meaning

raw marble

awaiting the sculptor

what is the form

what is the meaning

pure daring

the blow is struck

slip of the knife

slip of the tongue

irretrievable

obscene

cut away the flesh

expose the meaning

the freakish beauty of what lies beneath

Gradient Dawn said...

INNOCENT

Eyes daring tongue
into acrobatics

slippery

Hand displacing lilac skirt
exposing marble skin

tickley

The obscene yet to come
it was not

freakish

Only new

Lonely John said...

( TO BE
READ ALOUD, slowly)

Desire-
The moment,
and
feeling daring,
I let my tongue explore
Beneath her skirt.

The sweet
beckoning space
between
Her soft thighs
(Fresh lotus blooms-river water-
Slow, lustful current)

Her clitoris swollen-
A Hard marble against
My moving tongue.

Her moans at first
low, but
Building to a freakish volume-
causing
Several lonely heads
on the bus
To turn around.
(Their window-flash hypnosis
Now gone.)

Their focus now on us,
the couple
In the back seat.

Her desire expanding
I continued,
My tongue rotating in
Soft, slow circles-
she pulled my
Head hard against her
And came with a loud
Affirmative moan.

Eyes floating dead in the
overhead mirror, The bus driver stopped--the hiss of air brakes- yelled,
“HEY, YOU TWO!! KNOCK IT OFF!

Now almost everyone
Was turned toward us,
Their eyes obscene and accusing-
or curious and lost.

Amanda just laughed,
And pulled my face to hers.

We kissed long and hard.


The bus began rolling again,
through the dirty city at 2am-
down streets polluted with
regret, unreason, and cold hearts.



Faline said...

I lie on rose-tinted marble
in silent summer sun…
no shade desired…
dreaming of rain…

the scene may seem obscene to some
tongues…sunk deep in reflecting worlds…

and perhaps it does have its sideshow
vision…this happening…this ‘freakish’ decision…
as…gradually…I horizontally transform all visible flesh
into burning crimson and white ice…evenly divided…

“daring…” they may say, “daring…but…"
and so it is that the predictions are repeated and repeated…

still…

I lie on marble…
in summer sun…
no shade desired…
dreaming of rain.